The mix down sounds like its not 320. i like the pads and melody, not keen on the vocal. Not to my taste but good work all the same

thanks for the comments so far guys!!

definatly gonna rework the tune.. personally i couldnt get rid of the vocal anymore.. it just belongs in the tune imo..
maybe pitch a bit.. see what ill do with it, maybe i will end up removing it..

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Nice track my gripe is theres no big ole trancey lead riff which this tracks kinda begging for,it just plods along to me without that.

Otherwise like what youve come up with

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Originally posted by djjasonb Nice track my gripe is theres no big ole trancey lead riff which this tracks kinda begging for,it just plods along to me without that. Otherwise like what youve come up with

working on that main lead thanks for the reply man

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Hey man,

Like the huge wide vocal sample, works well. I'm not sure about the mix, its certainly different, I wonder if it isn't TOO wide and reverby. Its making me a little dizzy listening, but I kinda like it too
The sub bass I think is a bit wrong, I can't hear it that well, but it seems to lack impact and just be a distraction, whether ts because its too low, or too complex its hard to tell. Maybe try moving it up an octave?
I'm listening on headphones too, so that'll have an impact I guess.
Good track overall, but have a look at the mix maybe.

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Originally posted by kitphillips Hey man, Like the huge wide vocal sample, works well. I'm not sure about the mix, its certainly different, I wonder if it isn't TOO wide and reverby. Its making me a little dizzy listening, but I kinda like it too The sub bass I think is a bit wrong, I can't hear it that well, but it seems to lack impact and just be a distraction, whether ts because its too low, or too complex its hard to tell. Maybe try moving it up an octave? I'm listening on headphones too, so that'll have an impact I guess. Good track overall, but have a look at the mix maybe.

hey mate, thanks for the reply! the updated version will be done in the next 2/3 days, every little piece of advice really helped a lot so far, still kind of have to figure out the mixing of the low, mid & high frequencies with the multiband compression, kind of need to get the hang of that. everything else is working nicely so far, if you guys got any tips or maybe have idea's for the tune it would be great if you would give them. thanks in advance fellow trancers!

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Listening.

Cool vocal samples, nice deep bassline, but its not as tight in the mix as it should. (maybe roll of some under 30 hz)

Percussions are nice and driving..

The overall volume seems very high, I sense some clipping.

Maybe add something to that main lead could be an idea.

The melody works well i think. it just need a little more spicing up.

You have a potentially good track here, just need some extensive mixing.

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thanks buddy, feedback returned!

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Hey there,

Already liking the bassline.
I'm liking the 2:30
Overall very swirly atmospheric trance you've got going on
man... been a while since I've heard your stuff...
You sound better

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Originally posted by canadian didjer Hey there, Already liking the bassline. I'm liking the 2:30 Overall very swirly atmospheric trance you've got going on man... been a while since I've heard your stuff... You sound better

been a while since i heard your stuff to! thanks for the reply man.

feedback returned!

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i need to start by saying this isn't my style of tune - it is too upbeat and energetic for a pr0gmope like me

however, this tune does have a warm and nice feeling to it, very appropriately name. i agree with some of the others here that some mixing will really help to give this tune a clean and finished feel. that being said, i could easily imagine this in an ASOT or something - nice upbeat trance!

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