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R.j.
Di piú! di piú! di piú!

Registered: Feb 2004
Location: L, TX, USA
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Hello again!
Questions:
First, the sentence in question:
Ich bleibe auch zu Hause, und schreibe auch einen Brief nach Deutschland.
Question 1: Does it make sense?
Question 2: The definitive article, "einen," am I using it correctly?
Question 3: Regarding the portion following the comma "...und schreibe auch einen Brief..." My question goes: Since, in the first clause, I've established the person "Ich," must I include it in the second portion? Or must I remove the comma and merge both clauses together?
Question 4: If I wanted to further describe the letter as being a long letter, would the sentence go:
Ich bleibe auch zu Hause, und (ich) schreibe auch einen lang Brief nach Deutschland.
Thanks a lot.
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Aug-11-2009 16:46
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alexf
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Registered: Mar 2009
Location: auditory valley
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| quote: | Originally posted by R.j.
Hello again!
Questions:
First, the sentence in question:
Ich bleibe auch zu Hause, und schreibe auch einen Brief nach Deutschland.
Question 1: Does it make sense?
Question 2: The definitive article, "einen," am I using it correctly?
Question 3: Regarding the portion following the comma "...und schreibe auch einen Brief..." My question goes: Since, in the first clause, I've established the person "Ich," must I include it in the second portion? Or must I remove the comma and merge both clauses together?
Question 4: If I wanted to further describe the letter as being a long letter, would the sentence go:
Ich bleibe auch zu Hause, und (ich) schreibe auch einen lang Brief nach Deutschland.
Thanks a lot. |
1: the remarkable thing about your sentence is the double use of the word "auch". you would only do that if you want to stress that another person is doing exactly the same things (staying at home AND writing a letter). in that case, it makes perfectly sense, else you better go with only one "auch", stressing what you think is more important.
2: "einen" is correct
3: you better remove the comma, and don't include a second "ich", that makes the sentence more fluent
4: "einen langen Brief" would be correct
conclusion: "Ich bleibe auch zu Hause und schreibe (auch) einen langen Brief nach Deutschland"
on a side note: the construction "nach Deutschland schreiben" is unusual in german. better would be "einem Freund in Deutschland schreiben" or whatever is appropriate
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Aug-11-2009 17:07
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Rose
hmmm
Registered: May 2007
Location: -
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Fick dich.
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Aug-11-2009 17:36
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R.j.
Di piú! di piú! di piú!

Registered: Feb 2004
Location: L, TX, USA
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| quote: | Originally posted by alexf
1: the remarkable thing about your sentence is the double use of the word "auch". you would only do that if you want to stress that another person is doing exactly the same things (staying at home AND writing a letter). in that case, it makes perfectly sense, else you better go with only one "auch", stressing what you think is more important.
2: "einen" is correct
3: you better remove the comma, and don't include a second "ich", that makes the sentence more fluent
4: "einen langen Brief" would be correct
conclusion: "Ich bleibe auch zu Hause und schreibe (auch) einen langen Brief nach Deutschland"
on a side note: the construction "nach Deutschland schreiben" is unusual in german. better would be "einem Freund in Deutschland schreiben" or whatever is appropriate |
Many thanks!
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Aug-11-2009 17:42
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winston
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Registered: Nov 2005
Location: Yggdrasill
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Aug-12-2009 04:23
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