This one has sasha written all over it if you ask me. Very cool synth line, the changes in it are great! You should try having some pad chords that go with it, but chords that are more in your face not way back in the mix. Think that would be cool especially when the synth line is filtered down. Not sure if it would work just a thought.

Overall very cool track, would definitely play that out. Also if you could please take a listen to my track as well. (stiggy thread)

Thanks and keep up the good work!

Great staff man, really good improvement over the first version.
If you could add a vocal to it, that would be an amazing song craigb1.

Well done man, keep the music coming.

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Sounds dope! The only thing I would do is add some chords at the break a cool string sound (but not cheesy strings) or a cool pad sound. That would vary it up a little and add some changes to the break.

Other than that i wouldn't do to much else with it.

great track!

I think it sounds really neat now. Was listening to it at my studio headphones, sound is awesome, some small details have been added, it's not boring at all, love it.

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Thanks for all your feedback guys, im really happy that you like it, any suggestions on who i could send this kinda track to, ie, any labels specializing in this music?

Thanks

nice. you've really made a lot of progress on this. If you need any remixers let me know. I would be happy to work with your material =D

Thanks guys for all your kind words