Alanzo mentioned the only uplifting he could stand was Daniel Kandi, well, the sounds and the technical stuff in this track is awesome and actually a lot better than in most Daniel Kandi's recent tracks. But I think what makes Kandi's tracks so great is his interesting and very inventive melodies that always grabs my ears attention. This track has a very cheesy main melody, that contains something so sickening sugary, I really cant get through the whole thing without feeling a bit like vomiting. I would really really like to hear this track again, but I seriously need another melody to enjoy it... it is the only thing not positive I can say about it, the rest is good.

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Last edited by Lascodi on Aug-13-2010 at 12:29

Firstly I'm no expert in upligting, and I have much to learn, so keep this in mind about me.

It for me it lacks a clearly defined memorable personality, which may in it'self not be a problem for other people.

I can hear you have a good sense of musicality which as Cryo says is critical.

It's perplexing to me that Coldblue can make a banger like the one wuth no actual lead - just pads - which was the closing track on anjunabeats last albumn - I think the track mihgt be called 'Downhill', which gets away without a classic lead hook - I cannot explain yet how he pulls it off.

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Originally posted by Richard Butler It's perplexing to me that Coldblue can make a banger like the one wuth no actual lead - just pads - which was the closing track on anjunabeats last albumn - I think the track mihgt be called 'Downhill', which gets away without a classic lead hook - I cannot explain yet how he pulls it off.

Don't you mean Coldblue - 30 Degrees At Midnight?

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Originally posted by orTofønChiLd just as alanzo said, this track suuccccksssssss. no wonder nobody replied to this in the producers promotion page, just delete this and get it over with. Or learn how to make real music

lol

Thanks for the comments guys, I'm not sure what's causing the mixing problems. Not much in the track is compressed much in the song and I did a good bit of EQ cutting in the lower frequencies to get rid of the muddiness.. maybe there's just too much going on for someone with my amount of experience to get away with. I guess I can try toning it down next time around but as far as this track is concerned there's not really anything else I can do. I don't think the mixdown is horrible, there might be a few issues you guys are mentioning but I can't imagine the track is actually suffering for it.

I know I was asking for advice to fix this track but I think it'd be better if I just applied this criticism to my future works.

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Originally posted by Kysora lol

just to let you know i was trolling hehe

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Originally posted by Kysora I know I was asking for advice to fix this track but I think it'd be better if I just applied this criticism to my future works.

So you decide to keep it as it is or what? I'm gladly willing to help out with some melodic stuff if my tiny tiny experience can help, the track is really really good, I only wish the melodic part had a slightly different character. It's not much left before it's a monsterhit. With the EQ'ing I can only suggest to use more oZone

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Originally posted by Lascodi With the EQ'ing I can only suggest to use more oZone

Eh?

Only for a spot of mastering EQ if you feel you need it surely!

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Originally posted by Lascodi It was just a joke, Im really no mastering guru :P

you are better at music than jokes

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Originally posted by tehlord you are better at music than jokes

wow, thanks, you are so kind, Im gonna dedicate the track im working on right now to you

hehe

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Originally posted by tehlord you are better at music than jokes

Agree completely, I would say much better in music !!!

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Ok, so next two tracks will be dedicated, lol

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