needs more energy and more fuzz to be attractive , there are very minor changes through the track hardly listeneable in its entire duration, add new counter melodies, new percussion etc...

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Originally posted by Rodri Santos needs more energy and more fuzz to be attractive , there are very minor changes through the track hardly listeneable in its entire duration, add new counter melodies, new percussion etc...

thanks, updated version to come soon, I'd like to know your opinion when its finalized

Motion is actually pretty great track (or at least could be). It has a nice oppressive feeling.

Could use a bit more variation or perhaps some automation and something should be done about those hihats!

Hard to say more because I am a newbie.

PS. I find this link appropriate to this tread.
http://redwing.hutman.net/~mreed/wa...m/jekylhyde.htm

Last edited by offensive_newbi on Mar-29-2012 at 09:20

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Originally posted by Crotocol thanks, updated version to come soon, I'd like to know your opinion when its finalized

well my comment whats about djryan's shameful promotion attempt, tomorrow i am going to give you feedback of your track if you wish. Lovto see that what i see can be applied to every single track *sighi've to be harsher.

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Originally posted by offensive_newbi Motion is actually pretty great track (or at least could be). It has a nice oppressive feeling. Could use a bit more variation or perhaps some automation and something should be done about those hihats! Hard to say more because I am a newbie. PS. I find this link appropriate to this tread. http://redwing.hutman.net/~mreed/wa...m/jekylhyde.htm

Yeah I definitely agree about those hi-hats! That version has since been updated with a little more variation and changes to the hi-hats - But what do you mean about automation???

Respect

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Originally posted by Rodri Santos well my comment whats about djryan's shameful promotion attempt, tomorrow i am going to give you feedback of your track if you wish. Lovto see that what i see can be applied to every single track *sighi've to be harsher.

Oh shit okay :P I I listened to your Sean Tyas remix and I enjoyed it, you have a nice psytrance kind of style to your music.

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Originally posted by Crotocol Oh shit okay :P I I listened to your Sean Tyas remix and I enjoyed it, you have a nice psytrance kind of style to your music.

About MOTION [RE-EDIT ONE] i can say that sounds nothing like anything that would be released in 2012. Which is good it's not a generic track and the sounds, hat/perc lines used aren't the common ones.

The biggest problems in my opinion is the sound design, the pads/strings and the bassline sound flat, the plucks should have an automated delay/reverb to add more interest and the bassline towards the end of the track rattles with the kicks i'd fix this.