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Yevat I have just listen to your song , The songs sound image is produced nicely , your song writing needs a little work , I have read the posts about the parts were it gose silent , your on the right track and it think that you were trying to make a filter sweep in them parts , also the off beat bassline needs to play a cord progression that move with the melodi , Also you need to have more things happening not just a small fast one that you have , Trance music has sometimes 3 cords or melodies playing at onece and they are not all ways not them same notes . What you have got there is only a half finsihed track . What I would do is since that your melodi plays for 16 beats , have another one that plays for 32 over it than bring in some pads , pads are the carpet for a song that really fill in the gapes and gives it a nice feel , and how about a Bassline cord progerssion that moves with the melodi . I`am just trying to help out
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