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i think the kick and percs are awsome, when the pad comes in, its definately too loud, and the delay on that plucky synth that comes in after the pad i think has a bit too much delay and it kinda fuses together when the notes change. the break comes way too warly imo. And the pad chords dont sound right to me, they need one more note bellow what you already have, and that low note should be the base note of each chord, to give it some bass and define the chords. I think that note may already be there but its so quiet i can hardly define the chords, so the first bit of the break is confusing. i love how its been rearanged and influenced, nice synths, only real complaint is the pad is too loud for me, and at the beggining of the break, i dont think its full enough. very nice over all tho, i dont think the kick is too weak, but i think as more starts to happen in the track, it gets a bit over powered, so perhaps just lower the pad and perhaps up the kick a tiny bit if you can. Bass is alrite, but perhaps not qutie loud enough, its also a bit clicky, this could prolly be changed by putting the attack up VERY slightly. i think it will sound a bit smoother. the bass line itself is also a bit simple for my taste, but it works very well when the other synths kick in, just not on its own for me.
so theres a few comments from me, most are personal taste, but i hope it helps you if you want to go back and change some details  very very good overall, i love the sounds and the way uv influenced that track.
definately think break comes in too early and pad is too loud for me (just listening again!!)
mike
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