vox need to pushed to the back... they sound cool but when they hit the high notes, they sound very synthetic... get someone to sing those notes for ya, it'd sound much better

besides that, track sounds pro, keep it up

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i like the vocals, but they could stand to be reverbed a lil more just to drop em back a touch. i also think that note that the vocals hit in the 5th bar sounds a little funny. not so much the note itself, but the sound when it hits that particular note. love the progression, awesome bassline, awesome strings.

very pro sounding. the vocal thing is very original, so don't ditch it, just work with it.

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the gated vocals are a bit dry, more delay and another kind of reverb ( try ir-1 it juste sounds ... wonderful ), it's the element i don't really like there, sounds a bit too cheesy to me but once again, persnoal taste.


the open hi hats could me more groovey and less conventional as well.

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This is fucken tight! Good work. Could this be the start of a whiteroom style revolution? I hope not, but you've done an amazing job on capturing that style man. Vocals are... not quite right, but I'm sure your working on them.

Excellent pumping track. Can't wait to hear the final version.

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hey guys, i changed the vocals up a little, made it quiter, used a regular one note style... so please let me know what u think, is this better than before , good enough, or what the hell should i do?

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oh man what did you do to the lovely voice?!
you mosttt bring back the old one
this one is not good at all
also too bad you changed his notes..

This sounds much much much better to me. The old one was annoying, this is nice and relaxing. Good work.

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I dont think the bassdrum fits with the track, I suggest you change it! I love the bass you got going though! Maybe turn down the sine/square synth too! Second part of sample reminds me of ronski speeds remix of protonic! That acid noise man, almsot spot on!

Keep at it mate!

Shep

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Man, its getting there, but something about the vocals... I dunno, they sound overcompressed maybe? They arnt quite as distracting as the louder ones but they hardly sound like vocals now. Have you thought about using something like a vocoder or autotune on them?

Dont get me wrong, they sound good, but I think they could be better even.

There's this strange bit after the break at 1.05 where the vocals are really high and they drop down an octave. It sounds like they drop down a bar too late or something?

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You need the Armin Van Buuren FM Compression sound...

AWESOME TRACK

Lovin it with the FM compression I have

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Originally posted by A83 You need the Armin Van Buuren FM Compression sound...

check here for what he's referring to =)

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