monosyth singing melody rocks especially once it really starts in the breakdown

real good feeling.

as far as any constructive criticism goes, i agree with binkun about fading the strings in at 2:12 (maybe starting the strings out lowpassed a bit and opening up the filter all the way up after a measure or so would sound cool? but maybe you intended it to be that way for a specific reason)

i cannot stress enough how awesome the melody is and the synth sound too... especially around 3 minutes onward

also the bass synth towards the end... and i really like how you do the little note jump on the bass at the very last @ 6:48 - 6:49

Thx guys for all the cool replies. I'm gonna send this one and 2 other recent tracks 'Dream Machine' and 'Forgotten Time' (reworked version) to some labels very soon. I hope to get some positive response.

-Ron

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Last edited by Romi on Sep-11-2005 at 20:02

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Originally posted by Romi Thx guys for all the cool replies. I'm gonna send this one and 2 other recent tracks 'Dream Machine' and 'Forgotten Time' (reworked version) to some labels very soon. I hope to get some positive response. -Ron

good luck

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nice track man, pure quality.

What synth does the lead melo come from?

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Thx . That leadsynth is made with an Albino btw.

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I have to say this blew me away when I listened to it! I agree with what's already been said with the strings and bass, but all the same, would you have any objections to me playing it out?

Keep it up!

name_withheld, no objections here. Check your pm's.

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cheers mate for a wicked tune. used it on my latest dj demo disc and it has been the track that people like the most... your onto a winner! (full tracklist is provided with cd and only been sent to a few friends)

i used your 211kbps version... do you have better for use on a large system. not sure 211kbps will stand up on a 30k rig

rich

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Good to hear that more people liked it. Thanks for the promotion richg101. This one is gonna be played on etn.fm this saturday, so it's getting a bit more serious now .

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Originally posted by bjornc beautifull

Yes, I really like this track. Keep up the good work.
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