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Your elements come in rather suddenly in the intro, but not in a bad way. I like the way it builds, the bassline fits well; the arp is too digital though for too long, perhaps filtering might make it a bit cooler.
The kick isn't bad, but seems a little processed. Maybe a different, milder, smoother but still powerful sine-y kick would be awesome to complete the rest of this track's style and mood.
2:45, good snare roll, yummy pads. More stereo is needed!! hehe
3:11, lovely synth; much prefer this sound to the cold digital sound of the previous arp, though the arp notes were good.
3:43 break is coming along nicely, good build so far. The pad is de-emphasized heavily, though, which works okay however.
4:40 another lovely synth; it adds excellent ambiance and really glues the track together and makes it smooth as can be. Nice filtering through to 5:29.
Sudden transition to the outro, but i like it. The track knows its strengths, and knows when to stop, having gotten across a solid performance.
Good outro. I like the track.
Cheers, thanks for sharing. 
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