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i'm going to give as professional feedback as possible.
The whole track idea, very nice.
Basline, cant complain, very pleasant.
The tingling melody synth that fades in betwin 1:00 and 1:15 has sometimes too high freq for the ears compared to the rest of track. in other ways, it is all good.
The clap is a classic by now, i would have something different, but i think its just about the induvidual taste, just a tad lower volume on it would probably improve though.
The brakdown that you have at about 2:20 is great but flowed because of its sudden nature, i would have enjoyed it more if it was partially introduced in the buildup, so that the audience could almost expect how the breakdown will be.
Use less reverb, aim for quality in the breakdown.
overall thoughts, your baseline is very good and has a serious feel to it, the synths you use though are a bit too frivolous (opposit to serious) in a sense.
hope this input is of use to you, good luck!
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