Thank you Timothy! PhilB is working on it.

ohh Blaze Audio/VoiceSFX :P hehe.. Try out Steinberg Wavlab hmm.. never heard about that mic. Well. I serious think you sing good and, that the vocals need to be tweaked alot. or be "recorded" again.. because to "boost" up some bad recording is just stupid. all that noise etc comes to. So, my honest opinion would be to record again Like I said, Its nothing wrong with your voice. is just that its not "mixed" so good in the song. and It shuld have been Eq`ed, noisereductioned, made it dry, and one wet. Then add some deley, and a nice vocal reverb
As I also remember from the tune, the vocal was lauder some places, and not so laud. So, "changed some volume" at the lower parts have been nice to get it on the right glide as the rest of the song.
If you did understand

Thank you very mutch, this is really helpful!

Hey there
Thanks a lot to everyone giving out advices
The new version should sound a little better ... i hope! (up to you to judge)

Ciao PhilB (P.S.: How can i change my nickname here (to PhilB)? Or do i have to sign up for a new account?)

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Originally posted by montalray Hey there Thanks a lot to everyone giving out advices The new version should sound a little better ... i hope! (up to you to judge) Ciao PhilB (P.S.: How can i change my nickname here (to PhilB)? Or do i have to sign up for a new account?)

you can always pm Swamper about the nickname to change it to whatever you want

about the track it sounds nice to me. I like the vocals, the lyrics are really nice, but the vocals a bit off in places, should sync them better in the track.The whole production also needs some improvement, especially some eq work here and there, but it has potential in my opinion.

good luck with this one,

cheers,
Peter

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Thank you for your feedback Peter, glad you like the lyrics and the vocal , it means a lot!

Hey there!
Here is a new version of the track.
PhilB & Akia - Knight of Dark
I basically changed the vocal parts here and there and the bassline (a little more "subby" now, and not too "present" ... hard to describe lol)
I hope it sounds better than the old version, cause i didnt know what else to do lol.
Thanks for all the advices given here!
Cheers!
Ciao Phil

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the vocal is alittle off i think
and its kinda hard to understand everything you sing
but overall the track is very nice
well produced
nice melodies
good job!

hellooooo Mavve is listening =) sounds good but as mentioned the vocals are to dull and litle out of pitch , I like the new baseline, Im used to work with vocals this is what I do when it sounds dull, open a new chanel and put the vocals in there after pitch correction in melodyne , then add a compresor and compress to make the vocal stick out and compress hard, then I add some mono delay and use either 1/4t or 1/4 about 15-20 % mix on it whit 30 % feedback then the thing that makes it sound crisp I use a PSP vintage warmer you will figure out how to use it if you alredy dont and then add the reverb needed that shoud fix the vocal problem , Btw Skön röst du jade akia =)

my 2 cents! I think bye bye , Btw dont forget to coment My latest track its here in the forum some where and the vocals vocals are mad ein the way I wrote =) keep it up http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=370159

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Say hello Cheers

Thx a lot for your advices ... i ll take advantage of them
And i ll check your track (unfortunately i wont be able to do so before next weekend)

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Thank you .A.Y. , we (PhilB ) will try to clear up the vocals!

Mavve, thanks for sharing your experiences! Btw kul att du gillar min röst, jag var osäker på om den var bra nog! Btw 2 I´m loading your track now, curious to hear your vocals!

Ahh, great! Do tell when the next update of the track is, hard for an old man like me to hear the differences otherwise