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adi_hanson
feels a newbie.

Registered: Dec 2007
Location: Blackburn
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Sep-23-2009 21:37
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gsmaverick
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Registered: Mar 2009
Location: Ontario, Canada
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Wouldn't mind a shot at remixing this.
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Sep-25-2009 00:47
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Kismet7
nononoyesyesyesnonono

Registered: Dec 2008
Location: earf
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this is really good Owsey.
some things you might want to consider. you built something soft, warm, and melancholic in the beginning, and built a lot of rapport with that. i.e. there was a mindstate the listener likely went into and enjoyed being in prior to the beat dropping in. But the way you introduced the drums, and the overall drum sounds and programming changed things a bit drastically. It felt like jumping into cold water after the jacuzzi, some like it most might not. This piece might be best with no drums or with very minimal drums to glitchy nuances here and there, or very distantly spaced drums. Otherwise very thoughtful, I pictured all kinds of stuff listening to it, nice job.
Once finished you should submit this to people who place things for commercial, indie film, documentary type stuff.
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Sep-26-2009 13:14
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Owsey
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Registered: Jan 2008
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| quote: | Originally posted by Kismet7
this is really good Owsey.
some things you might want to consider. you built something soft, warm, and melancholic in the beginning, and built a lot of rapport with that. i.e. there was a mindstate the listener likely went into and enjoyed being in prior to the beat dropping in. But the way you introduced the drums, and the overall drum sounds and programming changed things a bit drastically. It felt like jumping into cold water after the jacuzzi, some like it most might not. This piece might be best with no drums or with very minimal drums to glitchy nuances here and there, or very distantly spaced drums. Otherwise very thoughtful, I pictured all kinds of stuff listening to it, nice job.
Once finished you should submit this to people who place things for commercial, indie film, documentary type stuff.
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Thanks a million, Kismet! When I was making this track I never thought much about the drums coming in too suddenly and being rather abrupt, but looking back I realize how much better it would've been if I'd "softened" them down. I'm going to rid the kick drum completely and a few more heavy parts.
I like your suggestion, but I wouldn't have a clue where to begin in that case It would be great to let a wider audience listen to my music.
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Sep-26-2009 13:27
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