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| quote: | Originally posted by SYSTEM-J
It was very well written Lira, the focalisation was brilliant and the smooth switch from positive-shaded external narrative voice to the perspective of a child was excellent. |
Whoa, I really appreciate it, thanks.
Meh, screw Portuguese, I'm sticking with English from now on 
| quote: | Originally posted by SYSTEM-J
And yet, and yet... for some reason I didn't feel sad at the end of it. Just detached. Fuck knows what's wrong with me. |
Nah, it's not you. It's probably some sort of Compassion Fatigue after being exposed to tragedies day after day.
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