I think you could boost the low end a bit. You've got a lot of mid here. Not enough to get muddy, but enough that the kick seems a tad weaker than it could be.

The biggest problem that I have with this track is that it is structured and orchestrated like an ASOT track. The melody is wonderful, and it's very beautiful, but at some points I actually wondered if I had heard this track somewhere before.

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static you are too cool for this board

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lol thanks for the honest comments.


PEZ68 : merci c'est toujours cool de voir des commentaires de français aussi

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Last edited by staticblue on Jan-15-2006 at 19:14

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Originally posted by Subtle BLEU

a bit mad k ?

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Hey Jon, even my Japanese Friends like your track

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Hey mate, think I've said I loved this before, but here's my feelings anyway..

Great intro, very crisp and crunchy sound. Mixing and mastering stands out right away as being pro. Nice bassline

Like the synth stabs at 1:25
Nice synths at 2:07,
Hmm, that kick break at 2:09, supposed to be like that? It jumped out at me while listening anyway.

Nice stringwork at the break 2:44, very powerfulstrings enhanced with the subby bassy string. Great synth stabs. Energy at 3:40
Nice
And it keeps buildup until the release at 4 min, nicely executed mate.


Very nice track, keep it up!

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Originally posted by Subtle BLEU

nice post, man!

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Very neat production, but I would love to hear some kind of "above&beyond"-style pulsating in the track, it would fit great, trust me

thanks

websley, what do you mean by "a&b pulsating" ??

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Nice!

Your sound quality is very pro now! oops.. u r a pro now
hehehe

cheers!

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