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Listening...I guess I'll split it up into the composer and the singer.
Speactra:
Well created frozen atmosphere in the beginning, but for some reason the bassline just doesn't seem to fit note-wise that is. Some dissonance which you might be going for. Pads at the break are awesome. Nice airy kind of barren landscapish feel to it. I think you did it with phaser. Sounds like square pad too. The melody just doesn't really knock my socks off. I don't feel it goes anywhere I guess. But that's just my opinion. Clean and solid production though.
Akia:
Vocals are pretty dark. You do have a nice voice, little accent to it. I do agree with the others though in that you sing the majority of the song quite monotonously. I understand that it's to preserve this desolate and empty feel, but some emotional wordless sounds likes ahhs and ooohhhs might grace the song and add the finishing touch. I'm curious as to what your emotional singing sounds like. Anyway, I like your singing.
Overall:
Track is cleanly produced and has great sounds. Some elements though just don't seem to mix melodically.
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