very good melody, has potential to made into a big trance tune with the right production

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Originally posted by JohnOC very good melody, has potential to made into a big trance tune with the right production

i agree, that melody is growing on me more and more


the production is still not flawless, but the bitrate of the mp3 might have something to do with that.

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quality stuff, melody is excellent. production quality is good but not spot on, there seems to be a fair bit of clipping + distortion. with a bit of tweaking this could be amazing

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Yeah okay....I'll bite again.

I also have it in my collection already, and I know I already reviewed on the first page but this is a great song.

You are the melody-master!

KEEP UP PHO!

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wow... i want to slap myself for not having downloaded this earlier...


this is definately a massive tunage.

Compared to most other "epic trancers" i hear from this forum, this one just has so much melody and passion into it... i would go nuts if i heard this...

you have put a lot of thought and work in the melody and it definately stands out from the crowd.

the 128 kbs is kinda hard to judge the quality, mixing and mastering... but from what i can tell, it still needs a bit more work...

absolutely fantastic

Amazing work! Love this tune to death.

Someone mentioned that the melody is weak -- I don't think this is the case at all. Very powerful, very moving, very emotional.

I think the end could be a bit better - that synth at the end seems to stop rather abruptly and there's not much after it. Might be better suited to have it keep the same note in the last 30 secs or so (much like in the first 55 secs of the track), as it may not be too easy to mix out of it into something else with a different (compatible) key. I'd also keep in a good phrase of percussion after that synth dies down for mixing sake as well. Some might argue a phrase of those percs might be boring, but you've got some nice FX in there that you could scatter about. Given the quality of this production I'm sure you'd have no problem making such a phrase interesting.

Again, amazing work, would love to play this in a set. This should definitely get signed!

holly shit this song roxx my socks out

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NICE! I see no reason why this wouldn't be signed. Unless it's the quality of the mp3 messing with the overall cleaness, i would have this mastered, copyrighted, and sent everywhere! I really think Armada or maybe Fundamental would sign this

I was amazed of the quality of this song and melody and beat went together right on time props man.

mm after listening to this again i love it
u really gotta get this signed man, its an anthem! its not just ur average trance tune, this could be huuuuuuuuuge

EDIT: WTF!!!!!!!!!!
the most retarted thing EVER just happened!!!!!!
right when i was done listening to this, Black dRagon ILTA msged me on msn, sent me his remix of this, the SECOND after i listened to this, LIKE WTF!!!!!! thats some wierd shit right there hhaha

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This song is awesome! You are very talented.