Eigenlijk zou het dan nog "July 7(th)" moeten zijn om grammaticaal een beetje in orde te zijn in't Engels.

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You pick up this working girl who's hooked on smack, who hussles and scores. "That's all I do" she says, she says "Ten bucks for head, fifteen for half-and-half". She says "Three hits a day at 35 per", you say "That's seven tricks a day at least", but she says "Sometimes I get lucky. Once this guy gives me a bill-and-half just to eat me, only time I ever came".
You figure you can save her. You sell your color tv, that keeps her off the streets a whole day. You hawk your typewriter for one jolt. Then your shotgun, your watch. A week later you say "Listen I'm a little short", but she says "No scratch, no snatch". You say "Look it is better to give", but she says "Beat off creep".
One night they spot you on the street in your skibbies trying to sell your shoes. You tell them who you are, but they nail you. Then she happens by and she says "Christ you look fucked", she says "Hang tough!". But you don't say anything, you just think "what a bum rap for a nice, sensitive guy like me".

En DJ is eigenlijk maar correct met hoofdletters

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Originally posted by Push2005 En DJ is eigenlijk maar correct met hoofdletters

Op deze manier kan t wel, gewoon alles tussen haakjes klein


En weer eens met Real, maar das wel een beetje miereneuken enzo hehe

Aight, er is nog een 2de versie van de flyer.



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Welke versie geniet de voorkeur?

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De 2de.

Edit: voor internetpromo hangt het af waar je post, op een donkere achtergrond zoals dit forum komt de 2de beter uit. Maar op de lichtere achtergrond van bijv. D4M zal de eerste meer contrasteren.

na 5 keer heen en weer gescrolled the hebben... vinnik de 2e beter

Na 50 keer op en neer te scrollen zie ik nog steeds niet waar het verschil zit.

Ik merk enkel dat de dj-namen wat hoger staan in de 2e. Da's wel mooier imo.

EDIT: Wow meer zonlicht in de 2e.
EDIT2: "7th july" is dan wel helemaal fout. Of ge moet er 7th of july van maken. *zift wat muggen*
EDIT3: Ei kopieert mijn posts blijkbaar nogal graag.

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You pick up this working girl who's hooked on smack, who hussles and scores. "That's all I do" she says, she says "Ten bucks for head, fifteen for half-and-half". She says "Three hits a day at 35 per", you say "That's seven tricks a day at least", but she says "Sometimes I get lucky. Once this guy gives me a bill-and-half just to eat me, only time I ever came".
You figure you can save her. You sell your color tv, that keeps her off the streets a whole day. You hawk your typewriter for one jolt. Then your shotgun, your watch. A week later you say "Listen I'm a little short", but she says "No scratch, no snatch". You say "Look it is better to give", but she says "Beat off creep".
One night they spot you on the street in your skibbies trying to sell your shoes. You tell them who you are, but they nail you. Then she happens by and she says "Christ you look fucked", she says "Hang tough!". But you don't say anything, you just think "what a bum rap for a nice, sensitive guy like me".

oh en tis natuurlijk, 7th of july, of july 7th [/miereneuk]

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Originally posted by Real Na 50 keer op en neer te scrollen zie ik nog steeds niet waar het verschil zit. Ik merk enkel dat de dj-namen wat hoger staan in de 2e. Da's wel mooier imo. EDIT: Wow meer zonlicht in de 2e. EDIT2: "7th july" is dan wel helemaal fout. Of ge moet er 7th of july van maken. *zift wat muggen*

nee, de achtergrond staat lager

edit 2, dat zei ik al

Tis topen dat ge allebei zo goed gaat draaien als dage nu muggenzift

Perfectionisten eh