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OK i'm commenting about the Promo Mix...or whatever, not the other remixes.
First of all if you wanna be signed, you'll have to get rid of some of the amateurish samples being used. Your hi-hats sound like hell. Keep tweakin'.
The "intro" should also be shorter, it gets kinda annoying.
Also your transitions could be a little smoother, maybe if you had more effects.
also i prefer a strong synth like the one Seventh City did in his "remake"  better, maybe you can try to get yours stronger?
Anyways, it's a pretty good song, you just need to keep tweaking and perfecting. keep doing this until you know its the bomb.
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The father made fetuses with flesh licking ladies / While you and your mother were asleep in the trailer park / Thunderous sparks from the dark of the stadiums / The music and medicine you needed for comforting / So make all your fat, fleshy fingers fingers to moving / And pluck all your silly strings and / Bend all your notes for me and / Soft silly music is meaningful, magical / The movements were beautiful / All in your ovaries / All of them milking with green fleshy flowers / While powerful pistons were sugary sweet machines, / Smelling of semen all under the garden / Was all you were needing when you still believed in me.
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