THE ULTIMATE PARADOX: Ultimate
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discraft ultra-star
flatball is the game we play
laid-back yet hard-core

cheers,
Marc

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no obstacles between my heart and my words; my lips, the great liaison to my soul.

Interlude

my eyes see but one
her face swimming in my mind
will you marry me





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orbax, think about girlies much?

lol.



-m

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no obstacles between my heart and my words; my lips, the great liaison to my soul.

Lol why do you say that haha ahhh but anyways. Yeah I do. Theyre great

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Im going to need some more bro. Those werent even 5 7 5!!! DO OVER!!!

Hey that's not fair!!Many of the Haikus you guys write arent't 5 7 5,(or maybe I've got the rule wrong,in that case,please give an example of how it should look)so why the hell should I be forced to follow those rules like a slave?!!

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"Wenn du dich zum Untergrund zählst, reicht es nicht, es nur zu sagen. Du musst auch viel graben, um es zu werden."

read cyclopters and mine. thats what they look like. haiku is a concept like the number three. if it doesnt have certain properties it isnt a haiku its just a regular poem

first gear, second gear
the roar of a huge engine
goodbye four banger


jiggling boobies
big silver dollar nipples
a really fat man


there not about girls

man girls are more fun to write about this sux!


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OK,so things like "I","It's","to" and so on don't count as a syllable.
That makes sense.But:

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jiggling boobies big silver dollar nipples a really fat man

Where's the 5 7 5 rule in here?I'm a bit confused.

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"Wenn du dich zum Untergrund zählst, reicht es nicht, es nur zu sagen. Du musst auch viel graben, um es zu werden."

its a syllable count not word count

jig a ling boob ies
big sil ver dol lar nipp les
a real ly fat man


clap as you say the word lol

Ah,so that's how it goes.Well,I guess I'll have to hit you a second time with some haikus,then.Stay tuned for those.

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"Wenn du dich zum Untergrund zählst, reicht es nicht, es nur zu sagen. Du musst auch viel graben, um es zu werden."

guess what I just did
I kept us on the first page
rah rah shish koom bah



her tongue on her lips
her dress falls to the carpet
a bra on a lamp




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Originally posted by Orbax guess what I just did I kept us on the first page rah rah shish koom bah

ahahahahahahahahaha... nice....

DALLAS COWBOYS
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talentless blunders
full of crack feinds and convicts
oh my god, we suck