Hey Everyone!

I'm back!

And I've made another sample.

Somes may know my old posting with the old sample:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?threadid=9942

I tried to make it better, so please check it out and tell me what you think. Feedback is highly welcome

And don't forget that it had been made with "Fruity Loops", so it could sound a bit "cheap". Well.. as I already said, please tell me what you think about it.

Thank you very much

is dis a mp3? its only 399k dood

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Breaks, house, electro & downtempo.

hey whats up!!

I really like the sample!!!...doesnt sound cheesy at all....has a bit of Max Graham to it...I worked with fruity loops a little, do you also have a keyboard??

dood dis doesnt sound cheesy @ all...pretty good..at first i thought i was like some kind of german trance...sick dood

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Breaks, house, electro & downtempo.

Hello, it's me again!

Thanks for the feedback.

@ Maximus: No I don't work with a keyboard, fortunately Fruity Loops works great without one.

@ Neon: Well it is a mp3, just a tiny part out of the whole track (if there existed a whole track )

I would like to know how I could make it better. So further feedback is still very welcome!

Glad It doesn't sound too cheap.

cool i just listened 2 it..nice fast beat..not cheesy at all id say either..nice

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M artijn


Johan Gielen Alliance 2002

Just listened to it! I think it's sounds great, definetly not cheesy at all! It's nice n fast paced, good melody too! Keep up the good work!

Hello again!

Thank you very much for the feedback. I hope I didn't use too much melodic channels, it kinda always sounds a bit messed up.

I hope I made it right this time. Perhaps I'll make even a whole track this time. Just have to check the basic structure of similar songs, have to learn build-ups and stuff

Someday I hope I can present the full track
Feedback is still welcome, thanks again to those, who rated it yet.

tight song, the soundquality isnt the best, but its nice from the small fragment of the song i heard. just so you know man, theres another place on this forum to promote your music and stuff, just take 2 seconds to look for it. you could probably find some better feedback there, or more profesional feedback i should say i guess.
well keep up the work man, hope to hear some more productions soon

yeah, sounds good! Nice flow!

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hey...it's pretty good...I like the first 15 secs, but the melody leads a bit to nowhere at 19 secs

Hi Again!

Thank you for the feedback!

@ftnb: I know the sound isn't the best and it's actually not like I want it, but I can't make it how I want, unfortunately. Where do you think I can show my works better than here? And actually I don't want to promote it, I just want to hear how people think about it.

@AndiH: You're right, it leads into nowhere, but I had to cut it off, because else I couldn't upload it anymore, since the sample would have become too big. I just want to say that it goes on from there on.

Thank you all for the feedback!