[trance] John Steenbergen - I Miss You

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John
In Praise Of The Sun

Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,

[trance] John Steenbergen - I Miss You

It's been a while since I finished something, but here it is And no vocals this time
Please listen and tell me what you think of it and what you think needs to be improved. Thanks!

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duration: 8.44
size: 12mb
bitrate: 192kbs

Feedback much appreciated

John

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Jun-28-2003 12:33 Netherlands

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MeiX
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Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Estonia

Nice and clean.

Introductive part is maybe too long. Sawtooth sounds kinda primitive.

Main riff is ok. Maybe you should try to move supersaw sound octave up.

Overall: 7/10

Jun-28-2003 12:54

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Mr.Mystery
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Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa

The main bit is great, but it sounds a bit dry. Maybe a bit more reverb or more stuff going on the background would help. The closed hihats are also a tad too loud compared to the rest of the mix.
Lovely tune otherwise

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Jun-28-2003 13:06 Finland

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John
In Praise Of The Sun

Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,

thnx for replying guys
ill see what i can do..if only i had a faster pc:@

john

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Jun-30-2003 14:01 Netherlands

Trancevision
MINDSOUNDSCAPES

Registered: Feb 2002
Location: Germany

Hi John !

like your track, melody is great.
Awesome composing of the track and I believe if you just work on the bassline ( too weak )...

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Jul-01-2003 08:09 Germany

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Icone
In Dreams...

Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Leuven, Belgium

Hi John

Lovely little track you got there. Nothing really special, but it works... I'm not too fond of the dry sound and some of the drums (claps & kick), but the rest sounds a ok.

Cheers
Wim

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Jul-01-2003 13:29 Belgium

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John
In Praise Of The Sun

Registered: Sep 2001
Location: Delft / Den Haag / Dordrecht,

thanks for listening tv and lw!
ill see if i can make the bassline a bit stronger, although it sounds alright on my radio and headphones
im not too font of my clap myself.. and i guess i need to add some reverb to make it more 'wet'
thnx for feedback guys!

anyone else?

john

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Jul-02-2003 20:37 Netherlands

nic01445
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Registered: Mar 2003
Location: HERE AND NOW

i have to agree: the bass could use some work. and the percussion is kinda dry. i like the patterns and everything, just needs a little reverb. maybe some eqing. i really like the breakdown. i would mess with the attack on the strings, so that they arent so stabbing, you know? give it more of a mellow touch. lead sample is kinda simple. great chord progressions! keep it up john!

-nic-

Jul-03-2003 05:58 Antigua