*WORK IN PROGRESS*

I'm moving house in 2 days, and i'm not going to be online for a short while until i get my cable fitted. so i want you people to check out my work in progress, very much a rough cut, and i can see/hear some things which need to be fixed myself, but if you guys can take a listen and give me some comments and idea's - i'm going to have plenty of time to work on this thing until i have my net connection up & running again.

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/stephe...o-remix)WIP.mp3


(BTW - the bass sounding a little out of tune in the second half is one of the things i know to fix )

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It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this
It was only a kiss, it was only a kiss

all those views and no replies - thanks a lot people!!

i'm off line for a couple of weeks from tomorrow, and no-one can give me any advice/criticism/feedback at all ???

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It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this
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Is this the same cut you sent me the other day?

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Not bad - I can't say I have any decent suggestions, but good luck with the move and all that!

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Originally posted by Mr.Mystery Is this the same cut you sent me the other day?

It's different,

longer, more synths, and new percs. still pretty rough though

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It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this
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[QUOTE]Originally posted by JMF [TrAcId]
all those views and no replies - thanks a lot people!!
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Boy do i know what that is like

Anyway, the track has got loads of good elements and is looking good, as you said this is a 'work in progress' so the only thing i can see that it needs is beefing up alot in the sound dept, but i think you will do this anyway when it is finished!

Nice work

(p.s. Good luck with the move )

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cheers for the comments Absynth yeah, you are right, this forum is a tough crowd indeed, but i'll keep working them, hopefuly by the time i get back online this will be finished and highly polished

just hope i can get the sounds i want without any help from my usual mentors

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It started out with a kiss
How did it end up like this
It was only a kiss, it was only a kiss

really cool rmx...but that snare/clap is a bit too generic...it doesnt seem to build up to anythin...but bein its just a clip, understandable...this has the possibilty to be great...gotta work on it though...the way u used the piano is great though...thas really cool and builds up the emotion...

I think there might be a slight clash between the bass and the kick... can't be sure, though.

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The Charlatan [Morphosis]