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hay
yeah i think its sounding good.
the vocals could use a bit of a reverb, but then loudend a bit.
the main melody is good, very melodic, but u dont use that to your advantage. you really should have it come in with more of an impact. theres no real build up 2 it.
also u used that same sound all the way through pretty much, not enuff variety, so it gets a bit repetative.
hopes it helps.
cya
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