ok... i'm tired and it's late so i'll give a quick review

drums are good I like the feel of it
fx, atmosphere, bass are also good

The only thing I don't like the melody... It doesn't stand out to me... When working with slower tracks, you have to be careful with the melody more and have it stand out to the listener and grab it's attention b/c that's what the listener will be listening at the most...


anyways, good work... and good luck in future productions