http://dj-gingi.artists.mpfspromoti...m/G.I.N.G.I.mp3

please leave some feedback, thanx

peace

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Pretty nice. I really enjoy the melody a lot.

The percussions could definitely use some beefing up. At 37 seconds you're hitting a wrong note; two notes are clashing, this happens at the same spot of the bar all throughout the track (1:32 as well).

This could be great though, keep it up.

Way too much phaser in the first synth, it just screams "Made with Reason" to me.

It also needs... something. There's no drive. But the melody is quite good.

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too much phaser like mystery said
same with the drive.. it needs something more.

needs more percussions

thanx for the feedback guys, ill be sure to work on the phaser

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Perhaps more fx effects, like whooshes, to dress it up a little. Melody is ok, but try to make the sound more phat.

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the bass notes sound alot like silver bath, other than that the melody is pretty cool.

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quote:

Originally posted by Mr.Mystery it just screams "Made with Reason" to me.

Giggles very hard to this ahaha, very correct.

I personally think the phaser in reason is horrible, when i hear phasers in tune that have been made in cubase they sound much better.

Think the synth is nice in structure but not sure about running it through the phaser as mentioned. Try some distortion maybee. Not to much originality going on in here, think its pretty pro.
Maybee try adding some of your own idea's into it now, or your next project (thats not a cocky remark either it will help you.)

Bassline and synths sound very push, but how many artists have we heared that attempt to recreate his tune's now.

Take care, Keep it up !

Burnski

to burns:

i made this one for fun
i have another 5 tracks or so if u checked my post in previous pages
i have about 4 diff. styles, none of my songs are the same but im glad u guys enjoyed it no i have to finish it

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