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sounds pretty good, very pro
although one problem
it soudns too much like above and beyond or oceanlab or whatever.
the melody is fuckin sick though. at 2:34 where you have htat kick, make it a ibt louder. if you want to have breaks like you did a bit after that, make it real breaks.
the seocnd piano melody is fuckin sick, although with the pads.
i like the way it builds too, but 3:22 - 3:28, that section of the melody sounsd a bit off, like it seems right that it would go higher instead of deeper. i know from producing that it is hard sometimes to fix that, but ya,work on that part. why dont you play that piano melody from the breakdown more throughout the song though, i think that would be good =)
anyways, good track overall, keep at it, and youll get your record deal (lvee aka airwave sent 64 demos before he got a deal) soya, keep at it, you're good man
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