Good percussion - I like the kick.. the mastering is good but you've got some clipping (distortion) but it isn't very noticable.. awesome effect at 1:21.. sounds very pro.. it gets a little old after a few minutes though.. especially the lyric.. but I guess that's progressive for you.. good job none-the-less!

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OK, percussion sounds really good. Think you've overused that crash cymbal though, it just get annoying after a while. Save it for the bigger buildups. Also, the snare rolls could be brought in gradually instead of suddenly volume-wise...

Apart from that though, the song is damn good.

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Originally posted by DJMikeyP Also if you have a new track with no feedback yet lemme know about that too.

Well I do have some feedback already, but as it's my first effort i'm sure you wouldn't mind adding your comments.

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Really nice percs, but definitely overused crash.

Bassline is kinda boring, but does the job. It's a nice bass sound, it just doesnt roll enough for me.

The vocal kinda gets on my nerves. Everything else sounding nice.

The rest of the track sounds very nice, a little repetitive but it is progressive and it seems like a real dance floor track.
Good work.

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Really liked the wheedley effect at 1:20 and the way you brought it out of the lull using it (about 4:35). I kept waiting for the big break to hit, then the reintroduction of all the elements. If you were going for a straight steady tone the whole way through, it's definitely there - keeps the energy the whole time. I usually like a bit more up and down movement in my tracks, but that's just me.

I think this track has good remix potential too - I can hear where a couple additional melody/countermelody lines could drop in

Oh yeah, and your perc does rock!

-Kev

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Fundamental -

LIstened to the track and posted on it.

And yeah I guess you guys ars right, the crash is a little repetitive... I'm just very stubborn, and I have a tendency to keep old habits a long time.. I think maybe now I should break the crash habit.

Everyone else - thankyouthankyou, i'll take it all into consideration.