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Agreed, you need to work on the bassline. It is not bass, it is more mid-range than anything else.
Kick sample is pretty average. Maybe go find some better ones.
Transitions where new parts come in are too sudden. Hide/Soften them with some little perc builds, a crash/ride, cut out the 32nd kick or a combination of the three to make the transition less sudden.
Sounds are too simple. The pad is a bit better but the lead and stuff in the breakdown could use some work.
Percussion is simple but alright.
That eary synth that comes in at 3:46 is better, and the melody that it plays is nicer. General melody is alright. Not enough to move my pants though.
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Hope that is what you were after. For your first serious production, its not too bad. You've got a fair way to come still but its all an enjoyable learning curve. Now go have a smoke and think about what I said...j/k.
Keep em coming mate, cheggy.
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