Capslock makes baby Jesus cry.

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Ok, its pretty nice, but not better than the original. It's way too muddy, needs some EQ badly to remove some mids and lows that are cluttering up the spectrum.

Otherwise good.

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Last edited by State of Matter on Dec-15-2003 at 21:38

Comments as I listen:

Neat intro, that kick is sort of offensive sounding though. Needs way more low end to it.

Bassline is a little cheap sounding. Needs a whackload more sub-bass to it and could generally be more pronounced.

I like the hook that comes in at around 1:35ish.

Pretty good lead at 2 minutes, but it doesn't stick out much in the mix. Your track has a very muffled feel to it and could use some cleaning up.

The main lead sounds far too fisher price sounding. You need way more low/mid on it, especially on the underlying notes, they should be dropped at least an octave.

When it comes back in at 4:10ish the bassline and kick are very obviously insufficient, really need to change both of em.

Overall this is pretty decent, but you need to work more on the kick, bassline and lead sounds. More percussive layers would be nice but not essential. Lots of positive points here, and overall a very good amateur effort, keep up the good work!

cheers for taking the time to listen and thanks for your comments. any advice will be actioned in future productions. thanks

No problemo. Just make sure that you help other artists such as yourself out by commenting on their tracks too.

out of all tracks...they chose one of my favourites of all time... Luis Paris - Incantation. Not bad but could be better.

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