Nice one,

At this point I feel I should say that I wouldn't be too concerned about what people think of it in terms of musical content. It's your track and so far the ideas sound good. It all depends on what sort of a track you are looking to write too.
There are probably some points that could be made from a technical stand with regards to your levels but that's stuff that I'm sure you are aware of already. It is also a little bass heavy i.e. it sounds a bit muddy but again I'm not sure what you are using to record it with etc.

Keep it going though

Just out of interest what are you using as a lead?

Cheers
Nem

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Hey thanks for listening man, i was really infulenced by gabriel and dresdens works, but i decided to make something more jumpy, something with good rythem that might sound good in a club.

As for the lead, i used 3 difrent saw layers that i made using the FM7 vst.

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Originally posted by DJ-Kreing^^ i decided to make something more jumpy, something with good rythem that might sound good in a club. As for the lead, i used 3 difrent saw layers that i made using the FM7 vst.

I wouldn't sey its very jumpy IMO

the rythem sounds good but i think u need too lower the delay's FX on it , bring the hi freqency's up abit & may be make it longer...
the bass sounds fine 2 me...

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Comments as I listen:

-Pretty good pads, though they sound a little muffled almost at the beginning and could be a little more crisp sounding IMO.
- Cool melody, I like it. I think the lead could use a little more sharpness though, and probably an HP filter.
- Good kick, but no percussions; I guess this is just due to the length of the clip though.
- Bass is okay, could be a lot louder.

Overall I think this has potential but could use some cleaning up. The entire clip has a sort of muffled muddy sound to it. Look forward to hearing more of it.

pretty nice track man... I really like it. I'm not a guru like some of these guys are, but the beat is really good and overall I think it's a great little tune, keep it goin bud

Thanks for listening guys
Means alot for me

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Good tune !But definately needs some remastering.Even at 256kbps it sounds a little deaf.But the idea is nice.
Keep it up mate!

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