DJ Sanctuary - Higher State [192Kb/s - 4.55MB 3m:18s]

Please download and listen to my first track, this in-production version has been created using FruityLoops 3. All feedback is appreciated.


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downloading now, i shall comment when download complete's. check out the thread by KilldaDJ and comment on our track please

Cheers

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Removed the summer skin head sig of me :P

the bass synth and percussion is too plain
you need a lead or something, it get's boring

but i do like the vocal's

Regards, DomZ

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Removed the summer skin head sig of me :P

I really need some inspiration for lead synths...or a guide on how to create lead synths...I can never find a good sound and I'm hopeless and creating orginal molodies. - Probably because i don't play/read music

If anyone has any ideas on how to help please email or post back.

Cheers DomZ

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i could tell you how to do it in reason but i don't know anything about fruity loops.

- musashi

Am I the only one that's only getting 12 seconds of this?

i use reason 2 also...any advice would be apreciated.

and...

yes you are the only one getting 12 seconds.


Regards,

† DJ Sanctuary

getting 12 seconds .

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

Okay now it's downloading the full thing instead of 12 seconds (odd). Listening...

Okay, got it. Sounds like you have the basic idea of what you're doing, but I agree, it needs a main lead of some kind, it's too boring and doesn't go anywhere. The vocals are cool though.

i have to say.. i can see what u were going for i think.. or.. well.. ok.. i think it is absolutely awesome.. everything except for the actual synth sounds.. it sounds really cheap... the actual music doesnt.. just the sounds.. i ran into the same problem using just the default things that came with fruity loops.. i have to say that reason really makes the difference with its variety of synths.. but of u like how fruity loops is setup.. i would suggest getting a vst plugin like native instruments pro53 or something like that to pick up the slack that fruity loops leaves behind.. your song is just awesome.. the only thing you need to change is tweaking the sounds really.. it may take a while to get a good sound but just keep messing around... my suggestion is try to make it less dry it sounds really raw.. ad spome effects to the that agressive melody you have going.

so yeah.. the melody sounds really cool.. its just you need to do something about the synth sounds ur making for the melody/lead

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Thanks alot for your helpful review...I realised the song was a bit raw and bland...bare in mind it's my very first attemp using FL Studio.

I'll try and change the sounds...the uploading file is the second edit (with lead synth) - I don't think it goes with the track either - it's out of key and me knowing little about music thought I could get away with it.

Cheers

P.S. Appologies for the 12 seconds only problem.

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