Hey man, intro melody is nice. The lead you use works really well here. Percussion is nice and strong, very Oliver Klitzing like. Not sure if it is totally suited to this style of trance but its still good. Structure seems pretty good so far, althogh the start of the song was a bit sudden.

@ 3 minutes in the breakdown, the pad is a bit pansy and needs some oomph. The main lead is a bit softwarish as well, which is a shame cos the beginning of the song was so nice.

Song is quite nice and the lead ended up growing on me a bit, but I think it could be a little stronger. nice work man.

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thanks for your comments, i'll try to make a better lead next time

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