Hello everyone this is my newest production: "Exceed" a bangin trancer for all of you to hear. This is my first posted song, (i thought his would be nice to begin with) any comments are welcome.

Syeker - Exceed
Lenght - 6:46
Size - 6.20 megs
Bit Rate - 128 kbps

the link does not work for me!!!

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Yeah, link seems down

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Sorry about that. I'm trying to fix it right now.

The problem is that damn server sometimes works sometimes not . Please try again if it doesn't work then try a few minutes later.

Perhaps not banging but definately intersting.

Not sure about that electronic sound that comes in at around the 30 second mark.
Song sounds a little empty although the bassline is nice and funky.
Again that sound comes in at about 1:20. I would drop this sound and build the song up differently as I feel it does nothing for it. It's also out of key with some of the other things going on in the track although that may be intentional.
The other thing that this song needs is some pads to fill it out.

I like the melody as it has a slightly menacing feel to it and I think it's definately something you could build on but it feels as if the song needs more work.

Keep 'em comming though... will be great to hear what happens.

Cheers
Nem

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Thanks a lot for the suggestions it means a lot to me . I always thought that there were some things missing but i wanted to know someone's opinion.