ok let's see you guy's flame this one too death, rofl (flaming is what i need to improve it, so yeh!)

my first production, some of you might have listened to the melody of it which i posted at an earlier date, here is the first attempt at a mix of it. regards and thank's for listening (comment's welcome)

Download: Domz LW - Unborn

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Removed the summer skin head sig of me :P

Last edited by Domz on Jan-03-2004 at 20:37

Not a bad little track there. I especially enjoyed the drop and synth/pad you got there at 1:20. Thought I got lost in scarface for a sec. I liked it. The melody after feels right. I think there are just some notes missing. Too many single notes, needs some more note progression if you get me? Aside from the lead being beefed up. I liked it. It gave me a good feeling. Heh. Still love that pad. How you make it?


Icewind - Fire Burns (Original Mix)

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Thank's for the reply. i really appreciate the feedback. As for the pad/strings, that's what my remix was based upon. I made a few string melodies, this was the best, then i started building lead's and bassline's and percussion etc.

I'm gonna take you're feedback and apply it, also i think the percussion could do with some more variation. Cheers.

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Removed the summer skin head sig of me :P

its fucking shit. go kill urself.


haha, mild humour from me there...


downloading, getright being queer, will comment once fin.

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Found Atlantis - Mixography [mix archive/mokumentary/my soul]?
i writed a song.

nice to see you are still abusing me! just because you got you're new pc don't go thinking you're all hard!

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Removed the summer skin head sig of me :P

im harder than j00 bitch!

yeah downloaded, its not bad, ive heard worse from u

the melody is original, the synths used r too basic and dont go into depth

as for variation in the percussion...well there isnt much

u stole some of my drumset u bitch

bassline is a bit basic, u need to thicken that up and work on EQing/compressing

expect a remix from me next week.

overall, its not bad.

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Found Atlantis - Mixography [mix archive/mokumentary/my soul]?
i writed a song.