Back to the topic, i like it to 3:00, it sounds abit empty after. I dont like the melody, it has something in the background, a missplaced note i believe. Keep workin on it.
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Jan-28-2004 15:11
Darrax
Junior tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2003
Location: U.K
It was nice until about 3:15, the bass went down a few notes and sounded really out of place. I really think you take a look at that.
Apart from that I like it, what did you make it on?
Only just noticed your from Sheffield too...class.
Darrax...
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Jan-28-2004 15:49
Kristoph
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Sheffield, UK
quote:
Originally posted by Darrax
It was nice until about 3:15, the bass went down a few notes and sounded really out of place. I really think you take a look at that.
Apart from that I like it, what did you make it on?
Only just noticed your from Sheffield too...class.
Darrax...
cheers for your comments, I use logic for sequencing, main synth's coming off V-station, percussion from stylus... used trilogy and atmosphere and a few other instruments in there somewhere....
aye I'm sheffield born & bred
Jan-28-2004 18:07
Kristoph
tranceaddict in training
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Sheffield, UK
new mixdown at the address above... fixed a few things
Jan-30-2004 03:00
BassAngel
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Sheffield, UK
Review as I listen:
Nice sound - listening to the build right now, very 'clicky' bassdrum though imo, keeps distracting me from the rest of the mix and what's going on.
People have told me I need more transition FX in my tunes and I think this could do with it too - just to break up the build a bit to keep the sense of movement I guess.
My work mate has just said "That's nice" from his work regarding the chords and I agree - nice unusual chords you got there mate. Sound is good at this point and got my interest.
Building back up - Can hear things clearly from where I'm sitting
When you drop in the Shhp I was expecting more shuffles and a build to the rhythm - something more at this point. Like the higher notes over the top.
My thoughts are very good production job, nice track, nice chords, it just needs a bit of variation re: shuffles/transitions as mentioned above - a bridge or something so you forget the main tune and then get back to it wouldn't hurt either.
Nice work!
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