http://home.planet.nl/~siemonbo/rad...nstrumental.mp3

Tell me what you think it's not made by me but i post this for some one else called Dj Cyxian

too repeating for me, but it has a great melody although it's quite simple. I think that if the melody could change somewhere after the middle it would add a greater feeling to the track, at least in my opinion...

tell Dj Cyxian I loved the song

im sorry, but it sounded a bit simple and flat.. even for an extended instrumental.. sorry to say

not too much changing going on as the song progresses, long periods of static. If u want to keep the length, change up the middle some to make it more interesting.

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Aah, but because of the much flatten I added another sample, maybe you can hear that one. And, I needed vocals maybe, but tell me, how can I get them? (not possible, otherwise, tell me!!!)

I'm Cyxian btw. I'm also working on an own track, I'll post it here later maybe.

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