This is the first production under my guise "Vital Signs", its a re-mix of TA producer Emota's track red sun, and its a little more powerful than what the usual Vital Sings tracks will be like! Please ceck it out and let me know what you think.

Cheers


--alex

http://terraplex.artists.mpfspromot...s%20re-mix).mp3

this is nice easy listening

however it does sound fairly old-school 97 kinda sounds, especially the percs + lead. i think the pad overpowers just about everything in the mix. if you work on the percs and main synth and get some counter melodies bouncing away and maybe some perc fx you will be well on your way to a winner

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nice one! I like 97

Yeah i might re-work bits of it, make it sound a bit better!

I actually really liked the way it sounds! Its really flowing and has a good drive to it, the bassline sounds nice, gives it a fast rythem. The synths sound really cool.
In some places it sounds abit empty and simple, the percussion stays the same from start to finish, abit repetitive.
But overall its really nice I like the ideas you got going there!

Keep those tunes coming!

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I like it too, the melody is a bit 'fixed' but nice
the bassline sounds cool too, but I think it sounds a little repeating after a while.

I really like it after all...

cheers M1cro5lave and DJ-Kreing^^

Ive got a few new peices coming out soon, using similar sounds with lots more variation so you may like them more!


--alex

sounds great, looking forward to it

Hey Alex sorry for the delay!

Very nice remix, i like what you have done with it! On the overall master maybe add some mroe sub bass, its lacking that! Other than everyone else has said pretty much what i wanted too!

Great track m8! Hope u remix more of my stuff

Shep

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Comments as I listen:

- Kick has an artifact at the end of it causing a slight clipping sound, get a better sample.
- As mentioned, percussions are really basic and could use some serious beefing up.
- Bassline is really cool but I think it could be a lot louder and carry some more sub-bass, adding a sinewave underneath it might do the trick for you.
- The plucky synth you use for the lead is pretty cool.
- Pads in the breakdown are pretty nice too, but add a bass pad underneath it to give it some thickness.
- Lacks energy at the climax due to the kick and lack of volume in the bassline.

Overall good track, great ideas and just needs work on the production end of things.

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sean i know some of the production is of , but we all start somewhere dont we, and dont forget im still kiddo, just 14 lyk!

Hey mate!

I have to agree with Luke on some points, as well as Sean. A bit more work and it'll be alright.

Keep it up,
Wim

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Cheers for listening wim

as i said, all comments i take down, and input in to future songs!

thanks again

--alex!