Love the new sound...smooth. With a little more work this will be an amazing tune. You must be on something to be pumping out these tracks all the time!

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nah, just laid off and lotsa free time

Firstly, glad you avoided using a Justin Timberlake sample

Production is clean, I really like your use of background FX, really help the flow and stand out enough without drowning the mix out in anyway - they sit right (this is the area I'm really looking at now y'see).

Chords in the break remind me a tad of Rank1 - Airwave but the trickled synth redeems it.

Hmmm, only comment I would possibly make is some of your leads sound a tad too "clean" if you know what I mean?

That is a very small criticism though, the production to my ears is great. Really noticing now those FX and crashes. Nice.

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Originally posted by seantyas nah, just laid off and lotsa free time

Wish I had lotsa free time

This track sounds great, the bassline makes it even better. The fx fits too. Nice!

thanks guys

about the airwave progression... It was pretty much unintentional until i realized,.. shit! its the airwave progression.. then i just figured hey, 80% of all music out there is built on the 1-IV-V progression, so ni didnt mind...

Cool track, really nice background synth work. Bassline could use beefing up IMO though, gets drowned out by all of the FX. That first pad that comes in could use some backing up by another pad I think, or maybe a richer sound. The airwave style chord progression is fine but not when it's just the pads playing, because it automatically makes it sound like an airwave remix or something. I'd try re-arranging things so the pads don't simply play that by themselves. Melody is pretty nice, but I think the main lead could use a little work, just not powerful enough on it's own.

Cool tune, can be worked into something great IMO. Thanks for posting!

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took yer advice... hope it was well implemented.. name is now Journey 2 Sunrise.. ill probably have agirl over to cut some whispers for it today...

http://www.seantyasmusic.com/st-jou...rise218clip.mp3

never mind, new version.. added some spoken words... sounds a lil bigger for you guys not diggin the lead i simply fattened it up a touch