The intro sounds really muddy. I know you're probably trying to go for a really noisy type sound, but it's just really lacking crispness. I'm also really not a fan of that sorta half muted heavily reverbed kick type thing, and it doesn't seem properly lined up with that percussive thing. When the kick finally comes in it's lacking serious power, you need to use a way better sample. Dunno, not my style and really needs some work despite that.

Cheers, keep at it.

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Come on...Its not THAT bad??? Maybe its because of it isnt Trance that you dont like it. About the bassdrum you are right maybe. I had my doubts about it also sometimes..

okay, maybe i reacted kind of agressive at your critics but i didnt agree to it.Maybe i cant have bad critics. My mistake. But i totally disagree with ur last critic that the song hasnt any energy.

All I can give you is my opinion! And FYI, I don't only listen to trance, and I make a lot of genres other than trance, including techno. This still wasn't my style, hehe.

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Last edited by Sean Walsh on Feb-18-2004 at 03:52