Hi There!

There is a my 1st Trance track.

Please write, where is bad, where is good.

Thx!

Track:
http://dickensa.waw.pl/~koso/ftp/DJ...Trancetrack.mp3
Bitrate: 256kbps
11Mb.
Time: 5 minute 35 second.

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Hi, I would be happy to have a listen to your track, but I am getting a really slow transfer, I don't know about anyone else. Maybe you could put up the song at 128k, and maybe somewhere a little quicker.

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Okay, I'm listening now.

First thing I have to say is that you should try and make changes occurr every 32 beats rather than every 16.

Song is sounding quite hard, which i like. Is this your first track or your first TRANCE track? Pretty darn good if its your first track.

Breakdown goes on for a bit. You need to make the breakdown actually go somewhere and make it build. Yours was just the same pad over and over which is a bit monotonous.

Your melody is okay but part of it seems a little out (the last quarter of the melody).

For a first trance track, I'd say you done well though. You seem to have the right idea.

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listening to it now!
so far it sounds very nice, bare in mind that i have never created any trance song nor any "kick"

after the bang at time (1 minute 20) it sounds super nice!

sounds very nice! i like especialy considering its ur first creation one thing i must note is that it sounds very varied if u understand what i mean by that but still very nice!! incredible


now a newbie question from a mere mortal how did u create this? prog? hardware? thanks!

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I create in Fruity Loops 4 and this Pads (1:20 minutes) i made in SoundFount Player with NorthPole sounds. This .sf2 i download from polish site ( i dont remember where )

This sounds + FX Delay (4 strings) and Echo FX (cathedral)

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holy crap, for a first trance track its pretty good, but the main melody after the long pad at the breakdown appregated sounds a tad amateurish. But for a first song, this is fucking great. I swear my first attempt wasnt so nicely done

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Good job with your first track Not bad at all.

The melody and the hats could use some filters though..and the kicks are to simple, so are the basslines. But it's awesome for being a first trance track.
Good luck in the future

brilliant synths!

just when it goes to the main bit where the beats and synths kick in together...the synths seem to be too loud for the beats....

but overall...top tune!!!

thats worthy of a label mate

That track sounds really good m8!

I especially like your attitude - full of massive hits and in your face synths.

The tune could definitely do with more interest, for example in the drums, but you'll definitely be cranking out wicked tunes soon enough!

me likes! sure, you can tell that its not a pro production, since alot sounds very dry, but the melody is great... the synth could be changed to another melody instead of that 3osc arpeggio... but keep up the good work, and youll get somewhere...

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