here it is :


http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=356089&T=4257

sorry, but i lmao when i listened to it.... where is the freaking beat???

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Description: THis is by far WAY better than my last track!! This could possibly be a top ten on this website it is that good. Made it on fruit loops too so forget the haterz IM OUT!!!!

atleast you believe in yourself.. a good thing... haha

but ok.. first off... scrap all the fruity samples.. they SUCK big time.

and give the track a beat

and making the track in fruityloops isn't an excuse for making bad track's.. there is alot of fruity users here that make's amazing track's.. there is several producers that is signed that use fruityloops... i use fruity myself and think it's a great progg...
so no excuses please

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Daniel

Nice to see a local TA on here. As for the track, um, you need drums unless this is an ambient piece. Maybe make the track go somewhere. Do something that "moves you". Makes you feel something when you hear it. Maybe you need to sit at a piano and work out something first. Try listening to some songs you like and copy them. That will help you figure out what you need to do.

Is this a joke?

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