Last edited by richard raiban on Mar-05-2004 at 20:36
Feb-26-2004 13:42
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Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2002
Location: Toronto, ON
..it's not bad,
but either way it has potential
nice
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Feb-26-2004 14:07
richard raiban
The West Side Baby
Registered: May 2003
Location: Monks Coffee Shop
quote:
Originally posted by Schryer
Hey Bro. That is a sweet Tune! Keep it up, you'll hit the charts someday and hopefully I'll get a copy to drive the crowd wild!
Send me all your productions, I would love to hear them! See you at Systems.
dont forget to call that lady!!! you promised her a callback @ 10.00am SHARP!!!
Feb-26-2004 14:57
Rocco
PierreM
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Toronto, Canada
yep... this track is ready to go to a mastering house where all the tweaking is done then out to a record pressing plant to get the promo copies pressed then off to chase down the record labels u go!
That percussive ride sort of sample that has the rhythmic pattern 'long, short-short', take the reverb off it. I like how sharp it sounds, but the reverb (or whatever) makes it sound like someone's playing pingpong.
The bottom end needs to be thicker too methinks, but that could just be my computer. Sounds like you've got it compressed well. Maybe too well. I don't know... Have a look @ that.
Those are my suggestions. Again, good job.
Feb-26-2004 20:57
mecha
<--RF-->
Registered: Mar 2002
Location: TO, Canada
nice job Rich
couple of things you can add one: vocal samples will feet properly
some atmospheric stubbs on top of your melody part and also some drums percussions will do be awesome as well
overall it is an awesome work.....
Feb-27-2004 17:46
richard raiban
The West Side Baby
Registered: May 2003
Location: Monks Coffee Shop
well guys, thank you very much for the feedback! ive removed the track and will post it up at a later date once adjustments have been made!!!
thanks again everyone!!!
Mar-03-2004 13:22
djshan
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Jul 2003
Location:
quote:
Originally posted by richard raiban
well guys, thank you very much for the feedback! ive removed the track and will post it up at a later date once adjustments have been made!!!
thanks again everyone!!!
ahhh no wonder i get perfectnav. oh well cant wait until you post it again.
Mar-03-2004 22:20
breathesteve
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2003
Location:
I'd like to hear this.
Mar-04-2004 01:25
richard raiban
The West Side Baby
Registered: May 2003
Location: Monks Coffee Shop
quote:
Originally posted by dj_moonshine
ahhh no wonder i get perfectnav. oh well cant wait until you post it again.
alrighty...ive added some changes and this is what it sounds like now...
quote:
Originally posted by breathesteve
I'd like to hear this.
now is your chance...
****refer to the first post to listen
Last edited by richard raiban on Mar-05-2004 at 20:43
Mar-05-2004 20:28
DJ_Ampz
Amp Radio Addict
Registered: Jul 2001
Location: Guelph (again)
Ill have a listen but drop me a line. im looking for more canadian producers to have on my show
Rate My Tune (But Be Nice) *LOL* ***UPDATE!!!
no wonder i get perfectnav.
oh well cant wait until you post it again.
