Thought I'd through this one a chance on the web...
Another track, this time both synthwork and the melody are quite simple but (hopefully) effective. Overally quite a flowing track, but quite dependant on your taste as I discovered. Nuff blabbering.

I am a link

Choon is 9:12 long, 192 kbps so file is quite large, hopefully won't be a problem.

Waiting anxiously
Oded

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Last edited by oDrori on Mar-31-2004 at 01:58

ur link is wrong
it leads to another post somewwhere on TA
http://oded_drori.artists.mpfspromo...xit%20Wound.mp3
thats the correct link ^

anyways about the track:
im having thoughts on these kicks of urs
not the best kick really...
i think u could use more percs, its kinda of empty in most places
the melody is nice, but the synths are kind of 1980 hehe
the bass is excellent, if u had a better kick it would sound even better.
overall good stuff, keep it up

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I agree with that guy ^^^ for the most part... I like the synth though Also, it frequently sounds really grainy- is that intentional? I don't particularly like it...

Overall though, nice track. Love the bassline!

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Originally posted by Sunquest ur link is wrong it leads to another post somewwhere on TA http://oded_drori.artists.mpfspromo...xit%20Wound.mp3 thats the correct link ^ anyways about the track: im having thoughts on these kicks of urs not the best kick really... i think u could use more percs, its kinda of empty in most places the melody is nice, but the synths are kind of 1980 hehe the bass is excellent, if u had a better kick it would sound even better. overall good stuff, keep it up

Is the kick THAT aweful? what do you think it misses?
And about the "emptyness", does it feel empty even when the track is "Full On" or only in other parts?

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Originally posted by smrq I agree with that guy ^^^ for the most part... I like the synth though Also, it frequently sounds really grainy- is that intentional? I don't particularly like it... Overall though, nice track. Love the bassline!

Whatcha mean by "Grainy"?

Thanks for the commentz guyz

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the kick is just missing a strong kick, i dunno how to explain hehe
and as for the emptyness its empty when its NOT full on, its empty in other parts
good question

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Hi oDrori,

Im sorry but I have to agree with the statements about about the kick. Thats all Ill say about that though.

This is a very interesting track. You got some cool FX. I like the percussion. The melody is all right. Not the greatest, in my opinion, but certainly not bad by any means.
I dont like the snare roll, if thats what that sound effect is supposed to be.
I think youre really creative. I like originality and this song is over-flowing with it. Its just not me though. Im not saying its sucks or even that its bad; just not me.
I think that Ararat is your stronger song.
Good luck in the future.

Hollen

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Originally posted by djHollen Hi oDrori, Im sorry but I have to agree with the statements about about the kick. Thats all Ill say about that though. This is a very interesting track. You got some cool FX. I like the percussion. The melody is all right. Not the greatest, in my opinion, but certainly not bad by any means. I dont like the snare roll, if thats what that sound effect is supposed to be. I think youre really creative. I like originality and this song is over-flowing with it. Its just not me though. Im not saying its sucks or even that its bad; just not me. I think that Ararat is your stronger song. Good luck in the future. Hollen

Thanks mate As always appreciated and taken in

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