Been ages since I've posted anything in here. This is the only piece of music that I've been able to finish off since I went in the Navy.
I didn't spend as much time as usual on it, so it's nothing new and groundbreaking in any sense, but I think it turned out pretty good It's 192 kbps, but I only made a (pretty long) clip since I don't know the legalities of posting the full song.
Comments are very welcome
Brilliant!
However the melody sounds a hell of a lot like 'Fresh Fromage' !
good to see you back !
Post the full version Fats !
I did & nobody complained !
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Apr-02-2004 00:46
J.L.
Never gonna give you up.
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada
First of all...
The way you warped the vocals in places like 1:55 and 3:12 sounds uber cool!
Living up to your name... your synths are definately phat as usual as can be expected from fatboy
Basically my take on this track is
melody (even though i'm not a huge fan of vocal trance) :
9.5/10
synths:
10/10
bass (a tad bit muddy but has a retro-kinda feel to me and sounds cool) :
8/10
mastering/mixing/overall sound (to my ears, it feels like it could use some more dynamics) :
7/10
Just a bit on the last point... I think your track sounds good as it is but I like a more thumpier track and I think it could use some more dynamics in the main section of your track with all the beats/bass/synths/vocals...
Also... finally... like the unique kinda retro feel to it... props
Apr-02-2004 04:36
Massive84
Old Relic
Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Sequence Realm
cool, the kick is bit low though
but nice melodies!
Apr-02-2004 09:15
Fatboy
trancEaddict Fatmonstah
Registered: Jan 2001
Location: London, UK
Thanks for the comments guys
netroM: vokal versjonen av FF er brent ut på en cd et eller annet sted. Jeg sender en pm hvis jeg finner den.
TOR: hehe, I guess I like em big
Luke: that should be no problem, check pm
Bren: about the melody, I said it wasn't anything groundbreaking Seriously though, I thought that chord progression suited the vocals so I just went with it
kewlness: thanks for that long review I agree that the bass is a bit too muddy. I had a hard time getting it right, and in the end I just had to settle for what I had. I also agree about the dynamics. I went abit overboard with the compressors
Massive84: I also wanted the kick a bit higher, but it interfered too much with the bass and I didn't have time to change everything around. Thanks for the advice
Very impressive track. Is it possible to get a 192kbps full version to play on my show on trancesphere?
Apr-02-2004 12:57
extalin
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2003
Location: Jacksonville, FL U.S.A.
quote:
Originally posted by kewlness
First of all...
The way you warped the vocals in places like 1:55 and 3:12 sounds uber cool!
yes! that is really awesome. this roxors
the part at 3:59 where its all orchestrated sounding is really cool and then at 4:13 it sweeps, gets all quiet and then busts out full again (i like this a lot).
during the first breaks section i like how you do the kick roll at
2:05, 2:12, 2:19, 2:26 it gives a nice effect.
and then the part at 2:26 and i really like that filtered synth.
starting at 3:15 there are these little synth stab notes, i think they are a good addition too.
also, how you drop everything out at like 5:01 - 5:05 and then come back is cool, you get the idea lol.
ok, this is a very energetic remix and i would like to hear the full version some time
It's 192 kbps, but I only made a (pretty long) clip since I don't know the legalities of posting the full song.
any chance you can get me this and rebound so i can play them out next thursday?
Seriously though, I thought that chord progression suited the vocals so I just went with it
