Well last time I submitted a track I didn't get much feedback, so im not really sure how it was. Either it was so bad people didn't feel like bothering to critique it, or people didn't download it. It had 60 page views, so im not sure . Here is my new track, im trying again, any feedback would be great. This was made using Cubase SX 2.0 and a number of VSTi's. Thanks

http://www.chicagosoundform.com/acc...gic-Horizon.mp3

Good construction of melodies. Sounds rich and full. The only thing that I didn't like is the drum kick you are using. Sounds a bit 80's techno. Other then that pretty cool track.

its ok man. melody is a little confusing, they all seem to be at the same volume. The kick and bass are just non-existent... very M.I.K.E. synth though. cheers - Anthony

Thanks for the feedback, I have no formal training and haven't been making tracks all that long, so any feedback is welcome. Only way to learn..gotta hear other peoples opinions. I also live in the middle of Chicago which is Trancenowhereville (people here don't listen to it, I have noone to show my stuff to) Thanks for the tips, ill work on strengthening the bass, and work on FX processing. (Im not at all good at Ambience or FX processing as of yet)

Hi !!
I like the melodies a lot in this song! But I think it needs a bassline. Something that makes it deeper!
Tell me if u like me to make a remix of it!

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//Moolow