Hey, first time I'm posting a track I'm working on. I'm anxious to get respons and suggestions for my first real production. So feel free to give me comments, both positive and negative. The name is temporary, because I havnt got up with a proper producer alias yet, but someday I hopefully will..

Download link: http://moore.secteam.org/dj_moore-spirits.mp3

Hi!

Sorry I'm not much of an expert but I can still give you feedback...

I like how this is laid back and calm, it almost has a new-age sound to it. It has a lot of resonance popping up everywhere which is interesting. The only thing I would do is supplement the atonal bell sound with something else. Sorry I'm not much help

This has really a nice vibe. You should reduce the volume on the synths abit, there are some clips (been there ). Other than that its pretty cool, im not much into Prog so i cant help much but this is nice.

Cheers.

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really like the sound of this one! keep it up

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Thanks for the comments, I'll try to do some more work on it.

i actually think this is quite good, but as everyone else said some of the levels on it just dont sound right. the strings are good, buti think you could make the kick drum a bit crisper (maybe compress it a little bit?)

anyway, looking forward to seeing the finished product

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Nice work Moore,

As the other says, it's a good song but keep the volume a little down.....nice melody!!! Forward to hear the finnished ch00n too!!
Good luck