I like it It sounds very pro! It makes a good soundtrack to Hoyle.

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Originally posted by kotus I like it It sounds very pro! It makes a good soundtrack to Hoyle.

Thanks man! much appreciated - what is Hoyle, by the way?

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It's a collection of computerized card games made by sierra.

love the INTRO strings on background
nice chill feeling when listening the track
dont like the clap, too loud maybe
bassline are nice
02:23 synths sounds very pro!
03.15 now the clap sound is getting very annoing
1st break is atmospheric and new distorted synths sounds very promising
again that clap
2nd break is way more better


little more work with percussions and new "mustneed" song is created.
maybe bassdrum need more power.
synth parts = perfect
these background "strings" try layer with some kind of heavy reverbed little detuned SAW string??
Right now they sounds too innocence
Your chillout trancer dont need drumbeats in start and end ... this track is made for pure listening pleasure.

Trevor Kay "Aromatic" = 7/10

Keep it up!

Sebraa

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Wassup TK you big wookie slut Aint seen you around for a while !

Anyways punk, nice tune man, your improving a lot. I think the kick and bass need to be a bit more powerfull powerfull, scream 4 power on the bass, and maybee some compression and EQ's on the kick, or even a stronger kick drum sample(s). Nice melodys and sounds in here man, youre improving like i said. Keep it up !

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Originally posted by burns Wassup TK you big wookie slut Aint seen you around for a while ! Anyways punk, nice tune man, your improving a lot. I think the kick and bass need to be a bit more powerfull powerfull, scream 4 power on the bass, and maybee some compression and EQ's on the kick, or even a stronger kick drum sample(s). Nice melodys and sounds in here man, youre improving like i said. Keep it up !

Thanks Burns - I always appreciate the feedback!

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Originally posted by Sebraa love the INTRO strings on background nice chill feeling when listening the track dont like the clap, too loud maybe bassline are nice 02:23 synths sounds very pro! 03.15 now the clap sound is getting very annoing 1st break is atmospheric and new distorted synths sounds very promising again that clap 2nd break is way more better little more work with percussions and new "mustneed" song is created. maybe bassdrum need more power. synth parts = perfect these background "strings" try layer with some kind of heavy reverbed little detuned SAW string?? Right now they sounds too innocence Your chillout trancer dont need drumbeats in start and end ... this track is made for pure listening pleasure. Trevor Kay "Aromatic" = 7/10 Keep it up! Sebraa

All great points - thanks for taking the time to include all that.
I'll incorporate a lot of what you said into my next tune!

Good stuff.

Any more?

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It´s a really great song, nice melody and variations, but I have to agree with Sebraa, that clap-thingy is really annoying. It´s too loud, either drop it completly(my suggestion) or lower the volume.

Dont know what else to say since Im a beginner in this lovely art of music production, but I know what I like and except for the clap this is really great!

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Originally posted by DylanSwe It´s a really great song, nice melody and variations, but I have to agree with Sebraa, that clap-thingy is really annoying. It´s too loud, either drop it completly(my suggestion) or lower the volume. Dont know what else to say since Im a beginner in this lovely art of music production, but I know what I like and except for the clap this is really great!

Thanks Dylan! That clap will change...

I love this forum, its great for helping develop a good production ear.

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We are the ones we've been waiting for

Hey Trevor Kay,

I like this tune a lot. The melodies are unique and different and i appreciate that.

as has been mentioned the clap is too loud or something, just doesnt do the song justice, but i like the precussion loops, just need to tweak the sounds a bit more.

Keep it up though, I expect great things from you - now can i make out with your mom?