oh yes very nice indeed!

ummmmm, some comments....

er, they'll have to be nitpicking comments as it all sounds pretty good. Perhaps a slightly fuller kick? perhaps 2-3 bpm faster?

I'd dance to it!

thanks for the comment j dax

maybe i should speed up the bpm

I would play it, definatly. But I feel that the kick is to sharp/hollow...it doesnt go well with the rest of the song.

the melodies are very nice and the samples used are excellent.
nice job!

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awww come on... no more comments?

Litening now..........


Ok, the kick does not fit the track, your production is good but that kick does not do it any justice as it sounds too thin..

At the break... Melodie is nice, oooh the bass and percs
AHHH then that kick!!!

This is a good track and i if i were you i would sort that kick and work on the mix a little more and you have cracked it.

Good effort mate,

Dunk

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i made song changes...see if hte new kick works

The kick is hollow. Try using some of the kicks posted under production forum. The rest sounds good.