Nice patches in the intro, and your kick and clap sound good. However when the claps drops out, it kind of sounds empty. I would use a hihat there, and more percussion in general. Again good synth arp patch in the break. Hey there's the hihat I was looking for. I guess it's good like that after all because I didn't notice at first how long the track was. About half way thru you should bring in a countermelody, to avoid overexposure of the main melody over time. Well I hope that makes sense, cheers!
Jun-25-2004 04:44
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
great review mate u reviewed my last track, very nice of u
nice to see its so positive!!!!!
iall write a counter melody then!
iam dying to get this track in great form
and if i have to write a counter melody.... i will.
thanks kotus
cheers, silverstone.
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Jun-26-2004 19:17
orrebo
tranceaddict
Registered: Jun 2004
Location: Mora
Link doesn´t work
Hi!
The link doesn´t seem to work.
//Micke
Jun-26-2004 19:24
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
yea they have gone down mate... should be back up soon hopefully.
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Jun-26-2004 19:26
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
Link is back up
enjoy!
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Jun-27-2004 08:27
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
Anymore listners...?
need lotsa comments :P
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Jun-27-2004 09:17
shockwavedj
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Coslada, Madrid, Spain
can't listen to, mate! waiting anxiously till it is online
I think that the Intro would actually be better minus the bass. For some reason, the bass in there just seems a bit cheesy with the pads. A nice chilled piece. Has a bit too many high freqs though; I would add some lower and middle frequencies to give it a bigger sound. Wow, that lead is painful to my ears. Perhaps a lower octave? I agree that a counter melody would certainly help this track. More percussion overall wouldn't hurt either. Nice and relaxing. Not bad at all.
Jun-30-2004 23:51
DJ_Silverstone1
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: May 2003
Location: Isle Of Man
i aint got monitors heh...
played it on my headphones on cd player, yea the lead broke my ears as well , the octaves rite imo its just the high frequencies are too much on the track overall
glad ya liked it.
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Jul-01-2004 06:48
alexpea
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Mosjøen, Norway
I dislike the clap... It's too loud, imo. I love the way you faded the melody in, but you should have waited with the percs, and instead added a stronger synth to play the mainmelody. Then hit the takeoff-button I think the song is a bit long, but it's quite nice to listen to actually
Silverstone - Sooth
